[nobody]

well my personal site is at http://www.aspyre.net/nobody Sky thought it was ugly as sin, what do you think? theres not really anything there yet, because i haven't thought of a good idea for it yet. anyway be brutal, i want you to ;-)

[The Neoracle]

It is ugly as sin.
There is no structure. It's all in the middle.
There are no graphics except that cheesy HORRIBLE flash think that blinks NOBODY.
Your banner is kinda cheesy too.
There is no design.
The way the links are setup is lame, should be in a drop down menu.
There's content, ie, no reason for it to exist.

How's that for  brutal.
Go to www.webmonkey.com, read everything you can, come back and ask questions.
;)

[jaredigital]

wow. i don't think i can post anything after what Neo said. :p yeah, read, read, read. learn, learn, learn. don't give up. :)

[capty99]

ive seen this site somewhere, fk maybe? well, i dont want this 2 sound bad, but its a start. just like everyone else you have started out and its a step. just continue on, i would suggest taking apart sites you like and seeing what they did, and then try to recreate that effect by yourself. that way you can continue on....

hey neoracle, maybe a toneing down would be a little bit more productive. just a suggestion. :)

[riceraver]

How about adding:
-it hurts my eyes
-oooh, that banner is annoying
-centered text...ewwwwwww

k.. i think we've covered everything to be as brutal as possible... :)

[jaredigital]

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Quote: from nobody on 3:47 pm on Oct. 11, 2001
be brutal, i want you to ;-)

he asked for it, capty. be careful what you wish for. :)

[The Neoracle]

Thank you Jaredigital.

[capty99]

my bad. i take back my statement . neoracle wins, again. :)

[nobody]

c'mon, thats as brutal as you can get? heheheh. i know its ugly, ok what i've got so far is, kill the centered text, get some content (i do have a little i can put there already), yada, yada, the big thing is graphics, i can't make anything that looks good! c'mon look at the silly jpg i made for my signature!! i've never been able to do visual art, even when i was a kid.

[capty99]

even when you were a kid?!?! is that a derogatory statement toward kids? my god. people these days. :)

well, i used 2 stink, and i still do , but on a stink level im only a 9, instead of a 10. just copy stuff. :) that should be my motto.

[The Neoracle]

Have you ever had a dream?  Do you have an imagination?  Then you can create graphics.   Find a site you like a try to use that "look."  I'm not going to say copy it cause I told capty that an now he's wanted in 3 states for copywrite and tradmark infringement.  

What's your favorite website. Try and recreate it, OR use it's style/theme/concept and try to recreate your site like it. Give them credit if you rip them, but it will get you started.