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With the login option on a different page, it's essentially a splash screen. They're mostly a no-no. Put the login form at the top of every page, with a "register" button next to it if they're not logged in, like you can here for example. The colour scheme is a bit nasty, imo, and your logo has a white background which you should trim or match to the page background.
If you want it to look professional you should write words like "you" rather than "u" in the blurb - aside from anything else, it's not really googlable!
Why is the text blurb in a box with a scrollbar when it would easily fit on the screen? It looks funny like that, like someone's made a mistake.
It's the wrong aspect. People are used to web sites they scroll down, not across, and while this scales ok, on a widescreen monitor it's just too spread out. I have text on my left, a picture in the middle and links way over on the right with spaces in between. Put everything in a centred container or shuffle it up against the side.
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