Just one thing I noticed, both your attempts are out of regulation sizes.
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Looks pretty good, one other thing you may want to play with is reducing the opacity on the gloss over the "e" in love as it is in the shadows it would make sense that less light would be there. But go with what you like more there, it is mostly opinion (like totally).
Possibly move the "All you need" down to be next to the L and above the"ove" in "Love", that could add an interesting dynamic to the text. And I would suggest playing around with spacing the text out so i is the same width as the "Love".