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Partners in Leadership Sample

Posted 01 May 2002 - 04:23 PM

http://www.arenasclaims.com/sample/

Made this for a client.  Just want to get some feedback before I show him.  Thanks in advance.

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Re: Partners in Leadership Sample

Posted 01 May 2002 - 08:15 PM

Reply, punks
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Re: Partners in Leadership Sample

Posted 01 May 2002 - 11:44 PM

Like the style, but it is lacking in substance. You need to make it a little longer with some other information punk :)

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Re: Partners in Leadership Sample

Posted 02 May 2002 - 05:04 AM

I agree with smckone, maybe add what the business/site is about. If they don't know what they are looking at they may not really care about a site redesign.
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Re: Partners in Leadership Sample

Posted 02 May 2002 - 05:10 AM

Ok, will do.  Thanks for the advice.

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Re: Partners in Leadership Sample

Posted 02 May 2002 - 04:52 PM

You mean "Thanks for the advice, punks."?

All it says is "Partners in Leadership"...

You definitely need some catchy phrases or something... and umm... why are you putting anything online if there's no site yet? I really hate it when a webmaster wastes my time with some intro movie and then it turns out that there is no site yet...  sigh.

If there is an old site, make that intro page go to it, and don't say "new design coming soon" in the intro... if you must say it, say it somewhere in the old site

(Edited by gneato at 7:54 pm on May 2, 2002)

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Re: Partners in Leadership Sample

Posted 02 May 2002 - 04:54 PM

ya ya im loving the style etc.. just need MORE of it. (content, graphics? etc)
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Re: Partners in Leadership Sample

Posted 02 May 2002 - 06:37 PM

i agree , good stuff , but More , also , maybe like move your name to the corner and link it to your site
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Re: Partners in Leadership Sample

Posted 02 May 2002 - 08:48 PM

The reason it is so short is because I just made it to show a potential client to show him what a possible intro could look like.  The final intro, if i get the job, will be much longer and better.

Im workin on a new look for Kasper Design, its at http://www.arenasclaims.com/kasper
tell me the goods and bads about it, thanks.

Matt Kasper

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