Adam
(Edited by Red93Cobra at 7:12 pm on April 11, 2002)
Posted 11 April 2002 - 04:11 PM
Adam
(Edited by Red93Cobra at 7:12 pm on April 11, 2002)
Posted 11 April 2002 - 04:50 PM
the contact link, i dont like it when it goes straight to an email address. make it go to a page w/ the email addres.. then u could also include some other info, if u dont want 2 include anything else still put another page, it may be just me but i dont like it when it goes straight and opens up outlook.
Posted 11 April 2002 - 05:14 PM
Posted 11 April 2002 - 07:08 PM
1) the particular shade of red that you're using, a little tough on the eyes, i'd try a darker shade, perhaps the shade of the 'Ford Racers' title
2) 'coming' only has one 'm' you'll want to fix that for professionalism sake, unless you're going for the long drawn out effect in which case i'd add at least 2 more m's
3) there's this little out of place red dash on the same line as your contact link, but on the darker gray, i think it might be something accident, but just thought i'd point it out so you know
other than those three things and the email issue mentioned by other members, excellent work i think
oh, one more thing, i didn't check it, but i see that you're using i-frames, do you have it so a page pops up just in case a person who's browser doesn't support i-frames can still see your content?
Posted 11 April 2002 - 08:56 PM
Otherwise, looking nice.
Posted 12 April 2002 - 03:08 AM
I've four suggestions.
1. I believe the bar with the semi-transparent "9.2 seconds" etc. might look more appealing as a solid.
2. Additionally, the manner in which the motion blurred logo rides over the car in the background, makes it look as though the vehicle is in a high velocity reverse. This could easily be remedied by flipping the image horizontally. Naturally, this would pull the eye rightward, which is where the navigation is weighted anyway.
3. Also, what madcat caught is that your graphical departures from the AM modular angularities are more than a little disconcerting. I agree with him, but that's a good thing. There isn't much that's safe or serene about hitting 160 in 9.2 seconds.
4. By putting your external links on the index page you are demonstrating a rather unusual eagerness to lose your visitors quickly. Being trigger happy, I had actually clicked on a link before I noticed it was a path off the site.
Posted 12 April 2002 - 06:27 AM
Posted 12 April 2002 - 04:54 PM
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