[codeman]

It's just a basic template and it still has errors but it's for a friend of mine and I want your feedback.  There are going to be a lot of updates and soon the site will move to a restricted access page.  since I'm making this site for a friend I don't know what content or anything to put on it.  Also, he's going to design the header.  He just wants the temp and then I'll take care of the rest once he designs the Flash version.  Anyway, here's the addy ;)
http://www.vdostudio.vze.com

(Edited by codeman at 4:45 am on Oct. 21, 2001)

[skyhawk133]

I'll review this tomorrow, I'm not in a good state of mind to do any critiquiing

[codeman]

OK that would be great, I started another thread and nobody critiqued it so I made this one, maybe it will make a difference. :)

[skyhawk133]

First thing, top is a little bland, to much with to little, if you knock about 100 pixels off it it would look ok with nothing there. I've always liked the 3 column look, the left column could be made "meatier", just a few pixels thicker.

On right right column, the borders on those tables should be black, the black one pixel just kicks ass and since you used it in the navi, you should continue it's use throughout.

Don't indent! Yucky..

Center your copyright statement in the middle column, not after the <table> tab.

That's about all I have, I don't like doing sitechecks, but you got one outta me :)

[codeman]

any others?

[codeman]

SOMEBODY ELSE PLEASE RESPOND! :):):):):):)

[jaredigital]

i didn't read chris's comments :rolleyes: so sorry if i repeat him. hehe...

the lefthand collumn looks like it should be closer to the edge of the browser window. too much white space.

that blank gradiated area at the top of the page looks like a waste of space. add graphics to it or cut it's vertical scale waaaaaaay down.

the tables on the right collumn look too far apart.

that's all the wrong i see. pretty nice!