[RyanRobinson]

Hi guys,

After a sudden influx of web design jobs coming my way via referrals, I've decided to finish off my website that has been lying on my hard drive for nearly a year. I have updated the copy and spruced it up a bit.

http://www.fluxspark.co.uk

Let me know what you think.

Thanks.

[amalfra]

good one ;;;clean and cool

[Finney_3]

The look of the site is nice and clean. I like the blue that you decided to use. Links work so that was a plus. I like the site. There is good balance.

[Sadin56]

Very nice youcapturedthe comtrast between blue and orange quite nicely while still keeping it simple keep up the great work

[Creecher]

Looks nice, though my eye was drawn straight to a grammatical error.

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Towing.biz are a tow truck company based in San Diego...

There may be more but I haven't really read the entire site.

[RyanRobinson]

Thanks Neverpool, but I can't see the grammatical error you pointed out.

[Ntwiles]

I believe he's saying that a company name should be singular, not plural. Thus "Towing.biz is a tow truck company".

This post has been edited by Ntwiles: 21 April 2011 - 07:02 PM

[Travis1012]

I think you should go through you entire site carefully reading every single word and look for grammatical/spelling errors.

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A new gas services business had just opened and where in need of a website to advertise their services on the net.

on the page.

As for what found, it is on the home page as the text for the "Featured Work".

This post has been edited by Travis1012: 21 April 2011 - 08:21 PM

[Lemur]

You need a darker yellow, this one doesn't stand out at all from the white background and is slightly hard to read.

The gradient gray to white needs to have a much lighter gray. The point of a gradient is to be subtle and help flow, and in this case it's blatant and draws too much attention.

You need to always have a line-height property set in your CSS to be 1.5-2x the font size at minimum for readability.

The titles on the right are too light and hard to read.

[RyanRobinson]

Thanks for the further feedback.

I have made some of the changes that Lemur mentioned regarding the line-height and colours of the right hand side text. I have also toned down the gray on the gradients. I will get round to the orange colours when I have time.

I have also corrected the grammatical errors pointed above.

This post has been edited by RyanRobinson: 24 April 2011 - 03:50 AM