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#1 ladycheri  Icon User is offline

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Can you check my latest work please? :)

Posted 28 February 2011 - 04:03 PM

Hello fellow dreamincoder.net members;

This is my first topic so sorry for any mistakes.

Here is the latest website I did in Visual Studio 2010. It is a website for a network marketing company.


By the way, I know that header is annoyingly huge but customer asked for it. Also I know product pictures suck because they didn't have real products I just painted them myself in PS CS5.

Here is the link www.cizginm.com

Thanks! ^^

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Re: Can you check my latest work please? :)

Posted 28 February 2011 - 11:16 PM

Well.. what do you want to a critique of? A quick run down:
No title is annoying.
Chunks of the CSS should be in their own file.
Your click-able menu doesn't indicate where I am (there's a bunch of white icons and one red one... shouldn't the red one indicate which menu button I pressed?)
The products are not expandable to detailed information.. like a larger picture or something of the like (http://www.cizginm.com/products.aspx).

The link http://www.conosour.com/ (found at the bottom footer) gives me a file directory... that's probably bad.
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Re: Can you check my latest work please? :)

Posted 05 April 2011 - 06:27 AM

not bad,
i would change the white bar below the nav to a black sub-shade for easiness on the eye.
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Posted 05 April 2011 - 01:47 PM

Adding on to what's already been said... the links need some hovers and the font at the top is horrible. Use a more modern font please, it would match your design better.

I'm not fond of the drop shadows on the buttons at the bottom either. Maybe lighten them up and have them appear when you hover over the links.

It's not bad though. I've seen worse. But it definitely needs some polishing.
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Re: Can you check my latest work please? :)

Posted 05 April 2011 - 05:03 PM

Get rid of the drop shadow on a few of the lower buttons.

Actually, all the instances you have of using drop shadow or any type of bevel need to be gone because they really don't match the theme and just scream amateur.

You need to aim for a coherence in your site, right now it feels like a random amount of objects pushed onto a page with no solid unity.

The bottom red boxes, you need to use 1px lines to accent division, what you've done is divide a header area and create some dissonance that distracts the user from the actual content of the box.

The actual content inside of those boxes needs to have better spacing.

That's all for now but I'll get a more complete version up either tonight or tomorrow.
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