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School Project Website + Competition

Posted 05 October 2011 - 08:03 AM

Hi everyone!

So here is my website:
http://www.pennypouches.com

It is probably the best one I have made ever, in my 4 years of Web Development. And it is not yet done (still some things to be implemented / completed).
What does everyone think? Any Constructive Criticism is greatly appreciated.

Also, does anyone know the best way to go about a single product eCommerce solution? The only thing being sold it the Penny Pouch itself.

P.S: If you are wondering why it is only 800px wide, it is because the product will be for phones and I want the web site to look good on phones.

Thanks in advanced!
Gavin

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Re: School Project Website + Competition

Posted 05 October 2011 - 08:13 AM

1. this link:
http://www.pennypouc...ustom_pouch.php
gave me this error:
Error occurred: 404 - not found

2. The 'about us' needs to be reworded.

3. The second P hooks off the image.

I still don't get what this is... a coin purse?
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Re: School Project Website + Competition

Posted 05 October 2011 - 01:59 PM

View Postmodi123_1, on 05 October 2011 - 04:13 PM, said:

1. this link:
http://www.pennypouc...ustom_pouch.php
gave me this error:
Error occurred: 404 - not found

2. The 'about us' needs to be reworded.

3. The second P hooks off the image.

I still don't get what this is... a coin purse?


Thanks for the feedback, it is still a Work In Progress which I should have stated. :)

1. Just haven't uploaded the custom_pouch.php yet.

2. Yeah, it's gonna' be finished very soon.

3. Thanks, will higher it up.

Yeah, basically. Have a lot of ideas for it and good business plan.
We are entering into http://www.studententerprise.ie for a competition with this product.

I am also looking for feedback on the design? Anything else :)

Thanks again! :D
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Re: School Project Website + Competition

Posted 05 October 2011 - 02:32 PM

Not bad...

The font on the main page, where you introduce the Pouch in the image looks too... 'normal', I guess.


And the entire page moves slightly to the left when you move away from the Home page.

Other than that stuff, I like it :)
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Re: School Project Website + Competition

Posted 05 October 2011 - 02:50 PM

The shadows are all jacked up. The menu shows a hard edge top left (indicating light is going down from top left to bottom right). It has a very deep shadow.

The middle bit has a thing small and shallow shadow around the image.

The bottom three columns and the "What is a Penny Pouch?" all have very large diffused shadows.

Perhaps picking one style and using it through out the whole thing?
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