Hi guys,
Site: http://firstpageriskfree.com
Custom theme built on top of WordPress. Still waiting for the client to send the rest of the content but it is effectively finished.
Let me know what you think.
Thanks!
Latest website
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#2
Re: Latest website
Posted 09 November 2011 - 12:56 PM
from my brief view it looks good
#3
Re: Latest website
Posted 09 November 2011 - 02:59 PM
It looks really good. The only thing that stands out is the blue bar 'Request a call back'. The fact that it spans the entire page draws my attention to it.
Also you could throw a favicon on there just for good measure.
Also you could throw a favicon on there just for good measure.
#4
Re: Latest website
Posted 14 November 2011 - 05:35 AM
Looks very very nice.
The only two things I would point out - the logo text looks a little blurred to me and the blue bar with the call back in just looks odd and out of place stretching the full width.
The only two things I would point out - the logo text looks a little blurred to me and the blue bar with the call back in just looks odd and out of place stretching the full width.
#5
Re: Latest website
Posted 15 November 2011 - 03:27 PM
Also with the call back function there does not seem to be any form validation.
#6
Re: Latest website
Posted 19 November 2011 - 11:48 PM
The header could use a lot of work.
The blue text is not clear, the gradient makes it fade into the background even more. The kerning (adjusted space between letters) is bad, it disrupts the flow of the text by spacing the letters. Artificially modifying the kerning of text will disrupt its flow.
The text below that is hard to read, I would suggest increasing the size or picking a crisper anti-alias setting for it.
The magnifying glass is blurry, find a crisper stock photo that has more contrast to the edges to make it stand out more against the white background.
The elements in the header, as they are now, are far too close to the margins of the container element. Move them in towards the center to relieve some of the stress on the design.
The blue text is not clear, the gradient makes it fade into the background even more. The kerning (adjusted space between letters) is bad, it disrupts the flow of the text by spacing the letters. Artificially modifying the kerning of text will disrupt its flow.
The text below that is hard to read, I would suggest increasing the size or picking a crisper anti-alias setting for it.
The magnifying glass is blurry, find a crisper stock photo that has more contrast to the edges to make it stand out more against the white background.
The elements in the header, as they are now, are far too close to the margins of the container element. Move them in towards the center to relieve some of the stress on the design.
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