[Freezer]

Hi, I'm new to web-designing, This is my first website so please take your time to have a look at it and help me out by giving your feedback and tips and tricks.
Would greatly appreciate it

The Address is: www.bitterbeam.com

Thanks a lot in advance

Freezer

[tlhIn`toq]

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NOTHING IS BITTER THAN THE TRUTH

You're missing a word here for this to make sense.

nothing is more bitter than the truth

To me it looks like a lot of other blogs built from a template provided with a web-building program, or an on-line site generator.

If this is actually all your work then take that as a compliment that it is complete and professional enough to have that 'look' about it.

As for the content... Well... Its not really from you is it? Its just the repeating of other sites' stuff, posts, tweets, whatever. Maybe that is just for testing. Maybe that is the intent of site. I have no way of knowing.

[Freezer]

tlhIn`toq, on 21 December 2011 - 09:25 AM, said:

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NOTHING IS BITTER THAN THE TRUTH

You're missing a word here for this to make sense.

nothing is more bitter than the truth

To me it looks like a lot of other blogs built from a template provided with a web-building program, or an on-line site generator.

If this is actually all your work then take that as a compliment that it is complete and professional enough to have that 'look' about it.

As for the content... Well... Its not really from you is it? Its just the repeating of other sites' stuff, posts, tweets, whatever. Maybe that is just for testing. Maybe that is the intent of site. I have no way of knowing.

Thanks for the heads up

Yes all this is my content which i have written, I have used other news and blog sites to gather articles then i blog about it in my own views
The path blog has taken so far is what I'm planning on taking on by providing a website that gives out interesting articles on random topics
Any feedback on that?

[modi123_1]

• The snow thing - super annoying.
  
• I have no idea what the site is about (outside of some personal blog) when I hit the site. The slogan doesn't indicate anything except for missing words... the them is pretty mundane..
  
• "Visit us today and find-out the difference." - wtf does that even mean?
  
• Yeah.. a generic wordpress look to it.
  
• Is there a reason to have the 'login' on the main page? It doesn't look like you are creating user accounts for people so... why not just take it off?
  
• The writing is nothing particularly fancy. I mean it just is. Expected grammar issues.
  
• I would suggest linking to the original article or source.

[Cocker081288]

I agree with modi123_1 about the snow.

You need to have a read through your text, as others have suggested as there are missing fullstops, words and capital letters in incorrect places. e.g. boring, The

If it was me I would reduce the articles per page as well as people will slower internet connections will have to wait a while for the main page to load. On average most people wait three seconds for a webpage to load (so they say).

Finally, on some occasions the text in sponsors overlaps it's self.

[Freezer]

Cocker081288, on 21 December 2011 - 12:03 PM, said:

I agree with modi123_1 about the snow.

You need to have a read through your text, as others have suggested as there are missing fullstops, words and capital letters in incorrect places. e.g. boring, The

If it was me I would reduce the articles per page as well as people will slower internet connections will have to wait a while for the main page to load. On average most people wait three seconds for a webpage to load (so they say).

Finally, on some occasions the text in sponsors overlaps it's self.

Thanks for the heads up I will look into those, the snow was a seasonal thing, will be taking it off after Christmas, i hope the articles are interesting apart from the grammatical errors ?

[modi123_1]

For me - no, not particularly.

[Freezer]

modi123_1, on 21 December 2011 - 12:10 PM, said:

For me - no, not particularly.

Oh oki, Thanks anyway though appreciate your feedback

[Cocker081288]

The topics I have looked at seem pretty good.

One small thing, why do some pictures have boarders when others don't?

You've already had one comment!!

I wouldn't worry about the articles to much as you have a large variety on the side. It really depends what your after.

If I wanted general articles, humour or technology It appears fine to me however if I wanted articles on the economy or stock market rumours it wouldn't be to handy.

[Freezer]

Cocker081288, on 21 December 2011 - 12:15 PM, said:

The topics I have looked at seem pretty good.

One small thing, why do some pictures have boarders when others don't?

You've already had one comment!!

Appreciate you taking the time to review Yeah I made some mistakes of not taking the border off some of the images I've posted, must make sure i keep a proper layout on the up coming posts Thanks for the feedback and glad you liked it

[Cocker081288]

No problem, if you need anyone to look at it again or any help don't hesitate to ask!

[Freezer]

Cocker081288, on 21 December 2011 - 12:23 PM, said:

No problem, if you need anyone to look at it again or any help don't hesitate to ask!

Please let me know when ever you check it so i could improve more on the site
cheers

[Cocker081288]

Freezer, on 23 December 2011 - 03:40 AM, said:

Cocker081288, on 21 December 2011 - 12:23 PM, said:

No problem, if you need anyone to look at it again or any help don't hesitate to ask!

Please let me know when ever you check it so i could improve more on the site
cheers

Are you meaning your wanting me to take another look at it?