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blog launch announcement

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Hi all,
I just want to let you all know about the launch of my new business article blog .
Hope you enjoy the experience and find the articles interesting.
Your feedbacks are welcome.
I have a launch offer going on. Prizes worth 2100$ are up for grab. Do check out my blog launch offer too.
Thank you.

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Re: blog launch announcement

Posted 12 March 2009 - 03:00 PM

It looks like your theme could use a little tweaking - as you can see on the posts on the bottom of your frontpage, the background of the titles doesn't extend down with the text.
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Posted 12 March 2009 - 04:35 PM

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the background of the titles doesn't extend down with the text

Sorry could you be more specific? I did not understand
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Re: blog launch announcement

Posted 12 March 2009 - 04:39 PM

On the Launch Offer page there are many spelling mistakes. I would recommend reviewing the text before publishing. Also, just my opinion, but before your site becomes popular or massively used I would avoid using the 'we are a professional team' sentence or anything of this type. In some way this makes the customer think differently about the company reputation.
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Posted 12 March 2009 - 04:53 PM

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On the Launch Offer page there are many spelling mistakes

Thanks. Made the changes.

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we are a professional team

Sorry, I couldn't figure out where I have used these words/ Please point it out. I cant find it.
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Posted 12 March 2009 - 04:57 PM

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Sorry, I couldn't figure out where I have used these words/ Please point it out. I cant find it.


It's on the Launch Offer page:

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promote your business through us, professional seo for your site


Just type this in your browser search box and it will show you where it is.
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Posted 12 March 2009 - 05:06 PM

Oh you are referring to the professional SEO we are giving away as an offer? I used that because it is exactly what i am giving. I have 3 years experience in SEO and I am a free lance SEO worker as well. So i guess i can call my seo work professional right? If you found that in appropriate I will try and remove.

Feedback hugely appreciated thanks
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Posted 12 March 2009 - 05:15 PM

That is not inappropriate. I am trying to say that while you are at the starting level (you do not have major projects that could be listed on your web site), try avoiding such phrases, as the customers won't actually believe it until you have some kind of proof. Anyway, that's just my opinion (recommendation).
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Posted 12 March 2009 - 05:18 PM

Ok. Thank you :^: . I will see to it . Too bad i cant show a portfolio for my SEO work . If i had been a web designer it would have been easier. :)

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Posted 13 March 2009 - 08:14 AM

Wow - looking back, that's probably the worst sentence I've written this year. Sorry about that.

If you open up your front page, and scroll down, you'll see the post titled "How to write a business plan. Business planning help" - and you'll see that the title, because it is too long, has split into two lines. However, your background for the title isn't extending - which makes it look a little weird.
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Posted 13 March 2009 - 08:30 AM

View Postebusinesscorporate, on 12 Mar, 2009 - 06:18 PM, said:

Ok. Thank you :^: . I will see to it . Too bad i cant show a portfolio for my SEO work . If i had been a web designer it would have been easier. :)


You can show SEO on a portfolio - the trick is you can use the website and explain that you performed SEO services and then touch on specifics such as page rank obtained, any Adsense or Adwords services. Then I would also suggest blogging about trends in the SEO industry, keep abreast and touch upon current practices - maybe offer a tip of the week etc..,

Just a little friendly advice that's all.
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Posted 13 March 2009 - 09:25 AM

View PostNykc, on 13 Mar, 2009 - 07:30 AM, said:

View Postebusinesscorporate, on 12 Mar, 2009 - 06:18 PM, said:

Ok. Thank you :^: . I will see to it . Too bad i cant show a portfolio for my SEO work . If i had been a web designer it would have been easier. :)


You can show SEO on a portfolio - the trick is you can use the website and explain that you performed SEO services and then touch on specifics such as page rank obtained, any Adsense or Adwords services. Then I would also suggest blogging about trends in the SEO industry, keep abreast and touch upon current practices - maybe offer a tip of the week etc..,

Just a little friendly advice that's all.


Thank you. I have by SEO blog where i write articles on SEO, SEM etc.
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Posted 17 March 2009 - 12:04 PM

Looking for more feedback on my business resource blog

Thanks
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Re: blog launch announcement

Posted 01 April 2009 - 04:47 PM

The text that says "Business articles for entrepreneurs, business consultants and home based business" is quite difficult to read because you go from high contrast to very little as the text over laps the blue background. Also the images in the featured content auto size to fill up space and this just looks awful.
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