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#1 dazzlestar  Icon User is offline

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How About Checking This One Out

Post icon  Posted 30 June 2004 - 01:40 AM

www.apparatusmedialab.com

constructive reviews will make my day.
thanks y'all

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#2 MarkoDaGeek  Icon User is offline

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Re: How About Checking This One Out

Posted 30 June 2004 - 04:22 AM

From first sight I fell in love with this one, wicked design, very fresh.


I cant find anything major wrong with it, I really like it.

Some little things :

I didnt like how the scroll bar is a rollover rather then me clicking it, but thats a personal prefrance....


On the contact page maybe have a position title or a short thing on what the people do at the company, there are lots of people to choose from and if I wanted to contact someone directly at the company rather then the main email I wouldnt know who to choose, also maybe add a form on the contact page, then people dont have to bother going through the hassle of emailing, I know some pretty lazy people and it can become a big deal.

I noted the preloader for each page doesnt actually do anything, its just a yellow bar, maybe make it go from yellow to black or something, just to keep people with the rythem of the site.

The use of white space is nice, I actually like how the text is put off to the side and then theres white space to the right, some people may not like it but I do...

also the refine redefine thing is very cool,
overall I love it, great job.
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Re: How About Checking This One Out

Posted 30 June 2004 - 08:09 AM

great colors and great design, yea i agree with marko

some changes i would suggest to make things more awesome: try increasing the frame rate of the flash to around 30 or even higher, i noticed some of the shapes moving were a lil jerky. The other thing is when you see that graphic moving in the boxes like in the portolfio links, i think slowing down the speed at which that image pans by around 3-4x would be better, i just find it a lil distracting

other than those 2 lil things, i really like it, you should be proud
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Re: How About Checking This One Out

Posted 30 June 2004 - 09:27 AM

the small text is a little fuzzy. it's still readable, but it will look better if you use dynamic text with non-embedded system fonts like Verdana, Arial or Georgia.
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Re: How About Checking This One Out

Post icon  Posted 23 August 2004 - 04:00 AM

thanks guys ... i'm working on it.

hey marko:
i'm working on the form thing and preloader .... thanks for your comments ...
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Posted 23 August 2004 - 02:01 PM

The web needs more sites like this.. clean and simple.

really well done.

1 minor thing, I would change is get the logo for adobe acrobat for the download link.... only my opinion.

nice!
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Re: How About Checking This One Out

Posted 24 August 2004 - 06:42 PM

its not working. im getting page can not be displayed... i wanna see it! that not fair! :angry:
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Posted 25 August 2004 - 10:18 AM

didnt blow me away or anything but its a nice clean design (me likes nice and clean)

the text for the nav and contact page is way too small, perhaps u could list all the work as indented sublinks under each category
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Re: How About Checking This One Out

Posted 26 August 2004 - 07:50 AM

looks good buy takes to long to load...
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Re: How About Checking This One Out

Posted 29 August 2004 - 03:50 AM

like it :) how long did it take you? wanna teach me :rolleyes:
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