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Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 01 April 2009 - 07:37 PM

Can I Hear some poetry that anybody might have written.
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Posted 01 April 2009 - 08:18 PM

I wrote a set of haikus that make a little story:

"I planted a seed"

Digging in the soil.
Mud wedged in my finger nails.
The seed was planted.

Tending to the seed.
Water and sun sprinkled down.
A sapling peeked out.

The years crawled away.
Finally! Spring birthed a tree.
The fruit was rotten.
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Posted 01 April 2009 - 08:45 PM

His heart burns with shadows of despair
for thy sacred Gods have brought him to naught
whence the flaming vengeance seek prey

O Shelter me from thy flames
Great beast of the Earth
You did rot a thousand years ago.
And yet you came back to protect us.
Would you have it any other way?

Seek and receive the foul that was casted down
He layeth it on the other side
The alter accepted his offering.
And Zerobu was Born!

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Posted 01 April 2009 - 09:03 PM

There once was a hermit named Dave
He kept an old whore in his cave
She only had 1 eye
and was surrounded by flies
But think of the money he saved

Limmericks count right?
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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 01 April 2009 - 09:04 PM

View PostBlakeJustBlake, on 1 Apr, 2009 - 08:18 PM, said:

I wrote a set of haikus that make a little story:
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That's not how you haiku!
This is a haiku!















"tetsu to dennou
ookami no hikari
hayai KOODO"

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Posted 01 April 2009 - 09:04 PM

yeah
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Posted 01 April 2009 - 09:15 PM

The day has come
When humanity has risen from it's slumber
Standing before the throne in disarray.

For it seemed like a fleeting dream.
This memory of what was once life.
It was a test of kinship.
We failed the test.
The flames await.

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Posted 01 April 2009 - 09:18 PM

sorry for the interuption but i see Chris Kenworthy [skyhawk133] avatar on everyones avatar just trying to confirm whether its my browser problem or something else
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Posted 01 April 2009 - 09:20 PM

check out the avatar thread :D
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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 02 April 2009 - 04:58 AM

I am quite amused
By your theft of absynthe's
title syntax pal.
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Posted 02 April 2009 - 08:38 AM

lol
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Posted 02 April 2009 - 09:39 AM

View PostAmadeus, on 2 Apr, 2009 - 04:58 AM, said:

I am quite amused
By your theft of absynthe's
title syntax pal.

ditto.
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Posted 02 April 2009 - 09:48 AM

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View PostBlakeJustBlake, on 1 Apr, 2009 - 08:18 PM, said:

I wrote a set of haikus that make a little story:
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That's not how you haiku!
This is a haiku!















"tetsu to dennou
ookami no hikari
hayai KOODO"


Is it me, or does it annoy anyone else that WolfCoder posts in stuff that not a lot of people on this site can read?

There's a background in the {Reply} form that says "Please Post In English" at the end. ;)
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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 02 April 2009 - 10:52 AM

For I am nothing now;
I am less than i want to be;
I will be greater in the future;
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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 02 April 2009 - 11:19 AM

View PostAmadeus, on 2 Apr, 2009 - 04:58 AM, said:

I am quite amused
By your theft of absynthe's
title syntax pal.


Almost a haiku, except it needs one more syllable on the second line.
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