[skrilla monkey]

yes, it's time for more poems by yours truly! :biggrin: These are a few days old (about 8 days or so) but i just got around to typing them...eh, you'll get over it :biggrin:

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Untitled.

My eyes cannot express what I feel
My tears are only symbols of what’s inside
I love you.
You are my one.

My soul cries out for yours,
Only to be rejected.

My hand yearns for yours,
Only for you to turn away.

I know it’s there.
You are scared.
Be not afraid.
I will be there for you.

Peter Brown, May 20, 2002

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Control.

I cannot understand you.
The things you say
Are contradictory.
Would you mind telling me,
Just what the #### goes on inside?

I am tired of you!
You are jaded and illogical…
Is tormenting me your idea?
Or are you angry at yourself;
Hurting inside?
Would you mind telling me,
Why the #### you do this?

You are uncertain,
That I can see…
Just say it!
You control me!

Peter Brown, May 19, 2002

so there you go, hope you lik-ey :)

-pete

[Landon]

I think both poems were very well done. I especially liked the first one, very very good job.

[megamu]

I notice you're uber-emo.

:biggrin:

cool stuff tho!

[skrilla monkey]

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Quote: from Landon on 3:26 pm on May 29, 2002
I think both poems were very well done. I especially liked the first one, very very good job.

thx :biggrin: i try...i usually share because (i presume) people like me to. even if most people don't, someone might like it and that makes me feel good :).

yeh...

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Quote: from Ekostudios on 6:03 pm on May 29, 2002
I notice you're uber-emo.

:biggrin:

cool stuff tho!

über-emo? how? :biggrin: i suppose i am, though...heh.

thx :) i try hehe :laugh: :biggrin:

-pete

[IndieGuru]

Since I've been dubbed THE Indy Emo Kid, I wonder what my work would be like if I was a "haiku-writing motherfucker," as Dennis Leary calls it.  Instead, I write speeches.  Maybe I should start writing songs again.

[Landon]

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Quote: from IndieGuru on 9:05 pm on May 29, 2002
Maybe I should start writing songs again.

Oh yes! Everybody watch out for Lost Little Puppy!

[skrilla monkey]

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Quote: from Landon on 10:28 pm on May 29, 2002

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Quote: from IndieGuru on 9:05 pm on May 29, 2002
Maybe I should start writing songs again.

Oh yes! Everybody watch out for Lost Little Puppy!

:confused: ??? perhaps i shouldn't ask...:laugh:

[JainDough]

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Quote: from IndieGuru on 9:05 pm on May 29, 2002
Since I've been dubbed THE Indy Emo Kid

"7 locust s/t picture disc silver vinyl (out of 100)
"12 GUK something to write home about gatefold sleeve clear vinyl (out of 5)

you were saying? :biggrin:

(Edited by JainDough at 9:46 pm on May 29, 2002)

[skrilla monkey]

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Quote: from JainDough on 10:45 pm on May 29, 2002

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Quote: from IndieGuru on 9:05 pm on May 29, 2002
Since I've been dubbed THE Indy Emo Kid

"7 locust s/t picture disc silver vinyl (out of 100)
"12 GUK something to write home about gatefold sleeve clear vinyl (out of 5)

you were saying? :biggrin:

(Edited by JainDough at 9:46 pm on May 29, 2002)
[/quote]maybe i missed the point...but he said the Indy emo kid...

or maybe i should just shuttup :biggrin:

-pete

[JainDough]

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Quote: from skrilla monkey on 9:47 pm on May 29, 2002
maybe i missed the point...

i'm not that dense (indy, indie) go back a ways and theres a thread i started when he first came here, about his title as IndieGuru, maybe you werent around then. :biggrin:

[Cookie Mobster]

This Tread
       
 o00000o
o.My Head.o
o   .  .  o
o   u   o
  o __ o
   WooW
    WW

That is this this whole thread going right over my head! I have no idea where this thread went. And Skrilla those are some nice expressions you posted man. It is nice to beable to get your feelings out in just the right manner. I used to write (seems that I lack the time [ or maybe the emotions] to do it anymore).

Cheers Sam

(Edited by smckone at 7:50 pm on May 29, 2002)

[skrilla monkey]

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Quote: from smckone on 11:47 pm on May 29, 2002
-This Tread-
 ^(My Head)

That is this this whole thread going right over my head! I have no idea where this thread went. And Skrilla those are some nice expressions you posted man. It is nice to beable to get your feelings out in just the right manner. I used to write (seems that I lack the time [ or maybe the emotions] to do it anymore).

Cheers Sam

many thanks :) its how i release my emotions...like fights with mom about controlling me, etc...and wishing i had the courage to ask that one girl out on a date, she acts like she doesn't like me but im sure its there, i just lack the guts for it...

so i just write it out :)

jain: ya, indie, i know ;) my musical taste has changed über amounts since i started hangin around more with him and eko...i think im a better person for it...but thats off topic...

yeah i got it, i guess i was just a bit slow...im trying to write an essay, chat on AIM, email, and post on two forums. :fried: :biggrin:

[megamu]

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Quote: from skrilla monkey on 9:50 pm on May 29, 2002

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Quote: from smckone on 11:47 pm on May 29, 2002
-This Tread-
 ^(My Head)

That is this this whole thread going right over my head! I have no idea where this thread went. And Skrilla those are some nice expressions you posted man. It is nice to beable to get your feelings out in just the right manner. I used to write (seems that I lack the time [ or maybe the emotions] to do it anymore).

Cheers Sam

many thanks :) its how i release my emotions...like fights with mom about controlling me, etc...and wishing i had the courage to ask that one girl out on a date, she acts like she doesn't like me but im sure its there, i just lack the guts for it...

so i just write it out :)

jain: ya, indie, i know ;) my musical taste has changed über amounts since i started hangin around more with him and eko...i think im a better person for it...but thats off topic...

you're more emo minded then Indie, but Indie is more emo looking. :) I can't see Indie ever writing poems obout being wimpy with the shladies.

Pete's ears have been matured. My work here is done.

(Edited by Ekostudios at 10:23 pm on May 29, 2002)