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#136
Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry
Posted 19 April 2009 - 06:31 PM
well you are blonde/red head tehehehehe just kidding erica
#137
Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry
Posted 20 April 2009 - 12:29 PM
Best Haiku ever!!!! 
Fat bitch on a bike
Licking on an ice cream cone
She falls down
Fat bitch on a bike
Licking on an ice cream cone
She falls down
#140
Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry
Posted 20 April 2009 - 01:49 PM
doesn't the last line of the haiku should be five syllables
#141
Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry
Posted 20 April 2009 - 02:46 PM
I thought it was 5,7,3...
#142
Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry
Posted 20 April 2009 - 02:48 PM
It's okay Neo. *Hands poetic license* there, see? Now you're always right.
#144
Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry
Posted 20 April 2009 - 05:43 PM
You know that poem brought a tear to your eye.
#146
Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry
Posted 20 April 2009 - 06:16 PM
#147
Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry
Posted 20 April 2009 - 09:00 PM
cornier than a field of corn in cedarville, ohio 
@neo no i don't cry because it doesn't do anything...
@neo no i don't cry because it doesn't do anything...
#148
Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry
Posted 21 April 2009 - 08:38 AM
#149
Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry
Posted 21 April 2009 - 08:47 AM
actually i did it's suppose to be "may i" because "can i" sounds like you're not able to. and i said what i said because that's so old it's not funny any more, but i will hand it to you you're referring to if he is able to come...the point is i get it and it's corny...
#150
Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry
Posted 21 April 2009 - 09:23 AM
It was definately the best poem ever.

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