Caffeine Lounge Poetry

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#61 TechWar   User is offline

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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 05 April 2009 - 02:58 PM

It might be just me, but although they seem good, they also seem a bit forced.
Let it come to you, don't try to force it out.
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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 05 April 2009 - 03:03 PM

yea, i took like 10 minutes to write each one, if i spent longer time to think about it, they probably will be better.
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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 05 April 2009 - 08:45 PM

View PostWinstinology, on 3 Apr, 2009 - 12:53 PM, said:

Come to the forum.
Where we are happy to help.
Remember to be polite.
Here you'll feel at home.

You must not be rude.
Our Leader is Almighty!
So bow down to Kenworthy!
Don't forget your [code].


Nice, Winstin. :^:

In fact, I think that's the best thing I've read all day.
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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 06 April 2009 - 07:15 PM

She instilled a warm feeling in me when i first saw her face.
That beautiful face, on her myspace page.
It was then that i was pierced throught the heart
By Cupid's double edged arrows,
I knew we were meant to be.


I am bleeding
Not because of physical pain
But because of the many arrows that strike my heart
I am longing for you darling
If it is fated we shall be together
In bliss for eternity.




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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 06 April 2009 - 07:38 PM

*hands him a flame-retardant suit - walks away*

Fox - Walk away man, walk away..........................

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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 06 April 2009 - 07:59 PM

lol?
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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 06 April 2009 - 08:26 PM

View PostZerobu, on 6 Apr, 2009 - 06:59 PM, said:

lol?


You know as well as I do that Fox is gonna come on here flaming you for that one........... :)

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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 06 April 2009 - 08:27 PM

View PostTechWar, on 6 Apr, 2009 - 07:26 PM, said:

View PostZerobu, on 6 Apr, 2009 - 06:59 PM, said:

lol?


You know as well as I do that Wolf's gonna come on here flaming you for that one........... :)


Why would there be any reason for Wolf to flame me over this poem?
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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 06 April 2009 - 08:31 PM

*shakes head*
I know you posted it, did you read it?
If you did and you still want to ask me that question.....................




(even if by soooooome chance it's not about Absynthe, he will assume it is)
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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 06 April 2009 - 08:41 PM

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(even if by soooooome chance it's not about Absynthe, he will assume it is)


What gave me away?

and don't you mean computerfox, not wolf?

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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 07 April 2009 - 07:22 AM

Oops, yeah I did
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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 07 April 2009 - 07:57 AM

View PostZerobu, on 6 Apr, 2009 - 10:41 PM, said:

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(even if by soooooome chance it's not about Absynthe, he will assume it is)

What gave me away?

The fact that there is no subtlety to the poem? the fact that you are intentionally transparent? The fact that you have publicly identified yourself as a cyber stalker over the last few months?

Other than that, it was a real guessing game.
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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 07 April 2009 - 09:30 AM

Okay, so everyone knows that none of you have a chance with her. Give it up. If I hear one more OMGABSYNTHE*swoon* post I'm gonna report you for spam or something.
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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 07 April 2009 - 09:50 AM

View PostNeoTifa, on 7 Apr, 2009 - 08:30 AM, said:

Okay, so everyone knows that none of you have a chance with her. Give it up. If I hear one more OMGABSYNTHE*swoon* post I'm gonna report you for spam or something.


you may be right, she's just too good for geeks like us, but I'm gonna still try until she explicitly tells me to leave her alone

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Re: Caffeine Lounge Poetry

Posted 07 April 2009 - 10:38 AM

Then do it via PM and quit flooding the forums with your ignorance.
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